Introduction
The virtual world of Distance Education is constantly and currently evolving. Internet technology is on a continual rise, leaving room for advances in educational endeavors. Second Life, a current distance learning venture, is slowly becoming popular to the world of Distance Education. The virtual world of Second Life is easy to develop, has many benefits for educators and students, and fulfills a gap that currently exists in internet learning.
8 comments:
I think you have a good intro!
Your paper looks like it will be well organized
I am wondering if your second statement should be your first--internet technology is broader than distant education. Your second statement could say "thus, the virtual world of distance education is constantly and currently evolving" because of the first statement. I love that you are going to cover Second Life--I just recently heard about it.
I really like your thesis statement. Oh and thanks for commenting on mine!
Very nice intro, it gets right to the point.
Sounds like you have a very good start to your paper! I think it sounds great! :)
I think your intro is really good! It seems like you will have a good paper to write. But...what is second life?
I thought about you the other day when I walked into a computer store and saw a huge display of books and magizines titled, Second Life. I read a few of the articles and they were very interesting! :o)
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